![]() If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from Entwined With You? How could the performance have been better? Will never buy another book in the series. ![]() Suddenly turning a 3 parter into a 5 parter surely breaks the contract between writer and reader, even if it is only a moral contract. If I had thought about it sooner and if Audible did not have such a difficult returns policy, I would return it. There was no plot development or character development and if I heard him growl "Angel" one more time, I was gonna throw up. The story is stretched so thin, it's like wet toilet paper, and just as enticing. The first two were great and were moving along nicely with a great storyline and great characters and now the third part of a trilogy suddenly becomes a the third part of a five books series. What would have made Entwined With You better? ![]()
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